Written by Lee Erwin [story by Jerry Sohl]. First draft, September 5, 1968. Copy #14 in blue ink stamped upper right, with inked name Fred Freiberger (Producer). Plus title page and cast list. 6-hole punch 3 brass brads remaining. A virtually pristine copy inside; covers near fine a bit of residue from the brads on the binding edge. Broadcast date: Episode 14, 10/18/68 The original story outline is also included here. By Lee Erwin – July 26, 1968. Condition: Near fine; a few small spots along left margin. Original first-draft script & outline for Star Trek: The Original Series [1968]. Original first-draft script Star Trek: The Original Series Episode. With the original 6pp. All white pages; no colored revision sheets. Broadcast date: Episode 14, 10/18/68. The original story outline is also included here. This is an authentic production script obtained from a collector who worked for NBC in the late 1960s. Led efforts to ensure that the show was renewed for a. Part of this effort, with creator Gene Roddenberrys assistance, was the creation of Star Trek Enterprises. Some of these were print overruns from the studio files but with different covers; others were reprinted as demand for more copies ensued. After a management change, the company was renamed Lincoln Enterprises. A brief note about scarcity. Scripts go through several drafts and sometimes several sets of writers before the cast and crew receive their “final” scripts. Therefore there will usually be multiple versions of a script with varying quantities printed for each version. Sometimes, the first draft is preceded by a short narrative story outline [or treatment or scenario] without dialogue or staging. These are intended for decision makers, anticipating a go-ahead to produce a first draft script. Story outlines are usually limited in quantity and may be quite different from the script that eventually emerges, if any. A first draft script might have only a few copies printed — for the producers, directors, and key production personnel — or there might be enough for the anticipated cast and crew to participate in read-throughs [table reads] to see what works and what doesn’t. Second drafts are sometimes printed only for key personnel and once accepted a “final” or “shooting” script will be printed for the rest of the cast and crew. But not always; a revised draft may become the shooting script and the additional copies for cast and crew are indistinguishable. Page revisions are usually printed on different color page inserts; sometimes there is no color change but an alphabetic suffix will be added to the page number. Bottom Line: Regardless of the version, only a small percentage of the surviving copies ever come on the market — all authentic scripts should be considered scarce. Books, magazines, and eligible paper ephemera. For items weighing more than 2 lbs. And Armadillo & Dicker Sacramento Ca. We no longer exist as bricks and mortar. Tailor your auctions with Auctiva’s. Track Page Views With. Auctiva’s FREE Counter. The item “Original first-draft script & outline for Star Trek The Original Series 1968″ is in sale since Saturday, January 4, 2020. This item is in the category “Entertainment Memorabilia\Television Memorabilia\Scripts\Originals\Unsigned”. The seller is “epluribusunusual” and is located in Sacramento, California. This item can be shipped worldwide.